finished

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a five-minute dramatic poem
++dir. zach durden
++perf. joshua luke smith
++spring 2025

i am finished.

“Two others, both criminals, were led out to be executed with him.

When they came to a place called The Skull, they nailed him to the cross.

And the criminals were also crucified–one on his right, and one on his left”

Luke 23:32-33

I am finished.

I’m dead to rights.

I’m debtor,

Doubter,

caught, and crucified.

I should’ve seen this coming.

This end.

This gravity.

Final bow,

Final breaths 

on calvary.

oh, I see the irony. 

We knew each other, you know.

together to the end

we schemed and stole together.

were gonna take on the world together.

Thick as thieves.

friends. 

but here we are. 

a splintered tree between us.

I’m on the right, he’s on the left

we’re waiting for Barabbas.

So who is this man?

Barabbas I know.

Barabbas, the fiend.

Barabbas, the liar.

Defiler

Unclean.

He’s like us

And like us,

he’s scheduled to hang

So where is he?

And who is this man?

We earned this. 

We deserve this. 

Each slash on our sides

Each nail in our wrists 

Each mocking thorn—-

even the names that they called us were true

But this stranger--

Replacing a criminal

Who are you?

But wait

Now that he’s closer, 

I know who this is

I’ve heard the stories 

of the things that he did

Who else could it be that gives sight to the blind

And makes crippled men leave their crutches behind

Who else sends the guilty back home in peace

And showers compassion on sinners like me

Oh god, what if everything they’re saying is true?

What if he’s dying for what he said that he’d do?

Wasn’t it his voice that made the ocean obey

Weren’t they his hands that took sickness away

Weren’t they his words that spun light from the dark,

That commanded from whirlwinds and powered the stars?

Whose clothes are compassion? 

Who lifts up the shamed?

Who is this mercy--what is his name?

I hear what they’re shouting:

“For a rabbi, you look good in a crown!”

“Show us a trick, teacher, get yourself down!”

“Make way for his highness coming through:

Ladies and gentlemen, I give you the king of the jews!”

You know, I’ve seen the kings that they kill, 

and it’s odd:

They all mock them with thorns 

but they don’t call them God

I’ve seen what their faces look like

before the axes comes down

So How could a guilty man

Pardon the crowd that kills him?

What king goes to his death as a lamb

Who could pray for the hands that beat him - is he more than a man?

They’re calling you Jesus but there has to be more

They have to remember they’ve seen you before:

Unchanging creator

Compassionate King

Our faithful redeemer

Pursuer 

Our peace

The conquering warrior

Our refuge, our lamb

The coming messiah

Eternal I Am.

I’m left here with nothing, 

cause death is my end

But you suffer beside me 

you still call me a friend

I can’t imagine a future

where I deserve to be free–

I should be forgotten 

But You said you’d remember me.

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